Thursday, September 29, 2011

Sonny Bill Williams

SBW was so excited to play against France . Side stepping and dodging one by one he was near the try line. It was like feeding at the zoo. Accurately diving for the try the crowd were cheering wildly. What a win for the All Blacks .


  1. Hey Uili.
    I really love this writing about SBW.
    I loved the way you said side stepping and dogding the french players.
    Kepp Up The Great Work Little Cousin.

  2. Hey Uili.
    Great story there was a abound of detail in your writing and your drawing. I loved the part how you said the crowd cheered wildly. Next time you should add one more sentence. Keep up the good work Uili.