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Tuesday, October 22, 2013

First Day Of School


Today we had 40 minutes to write about our first day of school. From looking at our writing we are going to set some writing goals for the term.

I wasn't really excited for school because I would rather stay home watch cartoons and eat . As I got ready for school I put on my uniform slipped on my shoes and walked slowly to the car. When I jumped in the car my mum shut my door and waved good bye to me as my dad drove off.


Just as I arrived I looked out of my window and saw kids playing outside running around and having fun. I didn't know why because I thought that school was for learning but it seemed okay to me. Walking into my new classroom room 5 I felt nervous and shy because I didn't know any of those people and it freaked me out how they all looked at me. My new teacher was Mrs she ,she was a very nice teacher to me because that was the only teacher I knew other than Mrs Jarman..

I got shown the toilets and the drinking fountains. The first thing I learnt was how to spell my name on the computer. A girl called Sylvia helped me spell my name. When the bell rung it was morning tea time. I guess school isn't that bad!!

My second piece of writing.


As soon as I woke up I ran to my mum and dad and started to jump on there bed. “Wake up wake up it’s my first day of school” I screamed.  I was really happy that I had finished kindergarten, I was actually more excited for my first day of school I finally wouldn't have to wait home all day getting bored to death.  I enjoyed kindergarten very much but was hoping I could learn better at school.

As I got ready for school I put on my uniform slipped on my shoes and ran to the car. When I jumped in the car my mum shut my door. “Have a good day”, said my mum and waved good bye to me as my dad drove off.

Just as I arrived I looked out of my window and saw kids playing outside running around and having fun. Dad I thought school was for learning I did not know you were allowed to play?I didn't know why because I thought that school was for learning but it seemed okay to me.

Walking into my new classroom my nerves just hit me and I clenched my hands as if I was in a boxing match. My new class was room 5 I felt nervous and shy because I didn't know any of those people and it freaked me out how they all looked at me. My new teacher was Mrs she “ welcome Uili this is room five I hope you enjoy your first day of school” said Mrs She. Mrs She was a very nice teacher to me, because she was the only teacher I knew other than Mrs Jarman.


I got shown the toilets and the drinking fountains. The first thing I learnt was how to spell my name on the computer. A girl called Sylvia helped me spell my name. When the bell rung it was morning tea time. I guess school isn't that bad!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Uili! My name is Elizabeth Johnson, and I am a student in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. This class teaches me how to be a teacher one day. You can visit my class blog here. EDM 310 blog. You can visit my blog here. Elizabeth's blog.

    I really enjoyed reading your post! You did an excellent job of describing your first day of school. You gave great details and used awesome vocabulary. I saw great improvements between your first and second writing. I could really relate to your post because we have all experienced a first day of school. Every year we start a new year of school. Awesome job!

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